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akpor died and went 2 heaven,  God so gud he  was amg dos who went 2 paradise so oneday he heard sum voices nd ask d angel dat wu ar those shounting, d angel replied him dat it was those wu went 2 hell fire answd d angel he ask d angel a gv chance 2 go nd jst luk der d angel agreed and told him dat he is 5pm dy normaly luk d gate of heaven and akpor replied him dat he wil b bak b4 5pm so akpor went der he saw d,banj  psquare donjazzy wit beautiful galz and everybody enjoyin themselv so dy entertain akpor he drank til he is ful wen it wap 10 min 2 5pm he ran bak 2 heaven nd  d angel told him dat he was luckily dat he evn wantd 2 close d gate wen he came lolz akpor told him dat he didnt cum 4 nfin bt he came 2 take hs belongings funny akpor

Nice one there, but you need to work on your punctuations. It really makes a post more interesting and readable.

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