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          CHAPTER 1

It was Lydia's birthday and her dad Erick, decided to buy a birthday present for her. When Erick get to the shop, he buyed Lydia a beautiful, nice doll. This doll was wearing a nice yellow shirt, blue pants and blue and red shoes.

When Erick get home Lydia's party was already started, Lydia's mom Victoria had buyed her a nice big Teddy Bear. "Daddy what you have bought for me?" Lydia asked her dad, "You will see after the party" Erick replied.
After the party, while the family was sitting eating a dinner, "Daddy you said you will give me my birthday present after the party" said Lydia, "Oh, let me go and get it for you" said Erick.

After a while Erick came to the room where they were having a dinner, carying a Nice doll. Lydia was happy fpr the present that her dad had bought dor her, and she named it Nydia.

When it was bedtime Lydia took Nydia and put him next to her. "Erick thanks for the gift you have  bought for our one and only daughter" Victoria said.

                  CHAPTER 2

The next day when Lydia wke up Nydia was not in the bed and Lydia found him sitting on the chair next to the wardrobe. There were blood stains on Nydia's shirt, and Lydia showed the blood stains on Nydia's shirt to her dad.
Suddenly someone knocked on the door, and Erick opened the door, it was the police officer, "Is this Mr.Roster?" The police officer asked, "Yeah it is" Erick replied. "Sir, today morning we found your neighbour, Mr.Johnson dead, and it seems like he was murdered" The officer said, "He was murdered by who?" Erick asked, and the officer told him that they are still investigating. "Thank you sir for the  ad news" said Erick.

The officer leaved the house and Lydia was sitting on couch with Lydia. "Daddy, what the officer was doing here?" Lydia asked, "Ohh, he was just telling me that someone stole two cows at the farm" Erick said. After a while Victoria came from the kitchen, "We have to talk" Said Erick, "About what?" Victoria asked. "Lydia go to your room" Erick said, Lydia took  Nydia to her room.

"Today morning the police officer came here telling me that Johnson was murdered" Erick said, "Johnson was killed? By who?"  Victoria asked, "I dont know the Police officer said they are still investigating... Whooa....whooa...whoooa wait a moment, today morning Nydia had blood stains on his shirt and Johnson gt killed today at morning, something is wrong here" Said Erick...
 


Will Post the next chapter after 1 week ;)


Willfred Seliba Lungile
Mr A Admin
Interesting horror story. I personally would love to read chapter 3.

The fact that you are 14 makes it sound even better. I am fairly sure many 14 year olds cannot write stories like this.

By the way, if you do not mind, I have decided to correct some (but not all) of the grammatical errors I found within the story. If you have a physical copy, you can make the changes there as well.

Keep it up.

          CHAPTER 1

It was Lydia's birthday, and her dad Erick decided to buy a birthday present for her. When Erick got to the shop, he bought Lydia a beautiful, nice doll. This doll was wearing a nice yellow shirt, blue pants and blue and red shoes.

When Erick got home Lydia's party had already started, Lydia's mom Victoria had bought her a nice big Teddy Bear. "Daddy what have you bought for me?" Lydia asked her dad, "You will see after the party" Erick replied.
After the party, while the family was having dinner, "Daddy you said you will give me my birthday present after the party" said Lydia, "Oh, let me go and get it for you" said Erick.

After a while, Erick came to the room where they were having dinner, carying a Nice doll. Lydia was happy for the present that her dad had bought for her, and she named it Nydia.

When it was bedtime Lydia took Nydia and put him next to her. "Erick thanks for the gift you have  bought for our one and only daughter" Victoria said.

                  CHAPTER 2

The next day when Lydia wke up Nydia was not in the bed and Lydia found him sitting on the chair next to the wardrobe. There were blood stains on Nydia's shirt, and Lydia showed the blood stains on Nydia's shirt to her dad.
Suddenly someone knocked on the door, and Erick opened the door, it was the police officer. "Is this Mr.Roster?" The police officer asked, "Yeah it is" Erick replied. "Sir, today morning we found your neighbour, Mr.Johnson dead, and it seems like he was murdered" The officer said. "He was murdered by who?" Erick asked, and the officer told him that they are still investigating. "Thank you sir, for the  sad news" said Erick.

The officer left the house and Lydia was sitting on the couch with Nydia. "Daddy, what was the officer doing here?" Lydia asked, "Ohh, he was just telling me that someone stole two cows at the farm" Erick said. After a while Victoria came from the kitchen, "We have to talk" Said Erick, "About what?" Victoria asked. "Lydia go to your room" Erick said, Lydia took  Nydia to her room.

"Today morning the police officer came here telling me that Johnson was murdered" Erick said, "Johnson was killed? By who?"  Victoria asked, "I dont know the Police officer said they are still investigating... Whooa....whooa...whoooa wait a moment, this morning Nydia had blood stains on his shirt and Johnson got killed this morning, something is wrong here" Said Erick...
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I LOVE THIS STORY, IT'S VERY INTERESTING I WISH I COULD WRITE STORIES LIKE THAT.
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Nice one, want to make me fancy horror.
I'll in anxiety wait for the next episode
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